Ben's Story
My name is Ben Christopher Thompson. Ben is not short for Benjamin and no one calls me Benji. I read a book about a dog named Benji once. He had seven brown spots on his back. I go to Henson Elementary School. My teacher is Mrs. Godfrey. She wears red lipstick everyday. I hate Mrs. Godfrey and I hate red. She told me to draw a picture of an apple once. I drew a green apple and she said it was wrong because no one eats green apples, you only use them for baking into apple pie. I threw my marker at her head, which meant I had to visit Mr. Lee in the Office.
Today is March 14, 2006. Today is my favorite day of the year because it is Pi day. Pi is the ratio of the circumference of any circle to its radius. The symbol for pi is π. Pi is approximately equal to 3.1415926. I have memorized pi to 230 digits. Whenever I feel scared I recite the number in my head.
This morning I rode the bus to school. It took 37 minutes. We passed 9 blue cars and went through 17 stoplights. We always go through seventeen stoplights because we always go to school the same way. I got off the yellow bus (Number 34) and walked up the steps into the building. My class is on the second floor in room 201. I walk 23 steps up and 10 steps to the doorway. I can’t walk straight to the door the way my friend Jeremy does, though, because my feet would touch the green tiles.
At 10:37 AM, the fire alarm rang. Mrs. Godfrey told everyone to line up by the door and walk outside. I did not do what Mrs. Godfrey said to do, which is bad. My mother will be angry with me for disobeying the teacher. Instead of getting into the queue, I ran out the door and into the hall. I hopped down the hall (careful not to step on any green tiles) and ran down the steps. I opened the door that said "EMERGENCY EXIT" on it and another alarm rang. Putting my ears over my head, I ran across the playground and into the street. I was very scared and I wanted to go home, but I didn't know which way to go. I ran up the street for two blocks and sat down on the black pavement in the street and curled up. I started to recite pi, all the way to the 230th digit.
I started over at the beginning, when I heard a loud noise. A car was coming over the hill, honking its horn at me. I tried to move but I was frozen and my legs wouldn't work. The man in the car yelled a lot of bad words and slowed his car down. When the car stopped, I looked up and saw that the man was getting out of the car and coming towards me. He was big and wore a yellow shirt and blue pants. The shirt had 14 buttons and his pants were ripped at the knees. He kneeled down on the road and asked me what my name was. I told him "My name is Ben"
He said “what are you doing in the road?”
I said “I’m scared and I want to go home.”
He said “Do you want me to take you home, son?” I knew I wasn’t his son, but I said that I would like to go home.
He asked “Where do you live?” and I said “1594 Washington Street.”
He said he was on his lunch break, and he could take me home after he had lunch. I said that would be okay and got in his truck. The truck was green and had the license plate, J6G-HYT8. I rode in the front seat because his truck didn't have a back seat like my mom's car.
The man drove to a restaurant called Wendy's and parked in the 3rd space from the entrance. He got out of the truck and helped me get out of the seat because it was really high up. We went inside the restaurant and the man ordered food. He bought me a vanilla milkshake. I thought it was nice of him. I drank the milkshake--which was very cold and thick--and he ate a hamburger.
After we finished eating, We left the restaurant and got into the truck. The man knew where I lived, and he drove me there. I arrived home at 12:20 PM. My mom didn’t know why I came home from school early, so the man told her about the fire and me in the road and the restaurant.
The next morning my mom told me that my school burned down. There was a picture in the paper of a big fire truck that sprayed water on the building. All of the teachers and students got out safely, but our class hamster, Ruby, died.
Sunday, March 30, 2008
Sunday, March 23, 2008
WA 7 second draft
Ben's Story
My name is Ben Christopher Thompson. Ben is not short for Benjamin and no one calls me Benji. I read a book about a dog named Benji once. He had seven brown spots on his back. I go to Henson Elementary School. My teacher is Mrs. Godfrey. She wears red lipstick everyday. I hate Mrs. Godfrey and I hate red. Mrs. Godfrey made me draw a picture of an apple once. I drew a green apple and she said it was wrong because no one eats green apples, you only use them for baking into apple pie. I threw my marker at her head, which meant I had to visit Mr. Lee in the Office.
Today is March 14, 2006. Today is my favorite day of the year because it is Pi day. Pi is the ratio of the circumference of any circle to its radius. The symbol for pi is π. Pi is approximately equal to 3.1415926. I have memorized pi to 230 digits. Whenever I feel scared I tell myself the numbers.
This morning I rode the bus to school. It took 37 minutes. We passed 9 blue cars and went through 17 stoplights. We always go through seventeen stoplights because we always go to school the same way. I got off the yellow bus (Number 34) and walked up the steps into the building. My class is on the second floor in room 201. I walk 23 steps up and 10 steps to the doorway. I can’t go straight to the door the way my friend Jeremy does, though, because my feet would touch the green tiles.
At 10:37 AM, the fire alarm rang. Mrs. Godfrey told everyone to queue up by the door and walk outside. I did not do what Mrs. Godfrey said to do, which is bad. My mother will be angry with me for disobeying the teacher. Instead of getting into the line, i ran out the door and into the hall. I hopped down the hall (careful not to step on any green tiles) and ran down the steps. I opened the door that said "EMERGENCY EXIT" on it and another alarm rang. Putting my ears over my head, i ran across the playground and into the street. I was very scared and i wanted to go home, but i didn't know which way to go, so i sat down on the black pavement and curled up. I started to recite pi, all the way to the 230th digit.
I started over at the begining, when i heard a loud noise. A car was coming over the hill, honking its horn at me. I tried to move but i was frozen and my legs wouldn't work. the man in the car yelled alot of bad words and slowed his car down. When the car stopped, i looked up and saw that the man was getting out of the car and coming towards me. He was big and wore a yellow shirt and blue pants. the shirt had 14 buttons and his pants were ripped at the knees. He kneeled down on the road and asked me what my name was. I told him "My name is Ben" He said what are you doing in the road. I said im scared and i want to go home. he said where do you live and i said 1594 Washington Street. He said he was on his lunch break, and he could take me home after he had lunch. I said ok and got in his truck. The truck was green and had the license plate, J6G-HYCT8. I rode in the front seat because his truck didn't have a back seat like my mom's car.
The man drove to a restaurant called Wendy's and parked in the 3rd space from the entrance. He got out of the truck and helped me get out of the seat because it was really high up. We went inside the restraunt and ordered food. The man bought me a vanilla milkshake. I thought it was nice of him. I drank the milkshake--which was very cold and thick--and he ate a hamburger. The End.
My name is Ben Christopher Thompson. Ben is not short for Benjamin and no one calls me Benji. I read a book about a dog named Benji once. He had seven brown spots on his back. I go to Henson Elementary School. My teacher is Mrs. Godfrey. She wears red lipstick everyday. I hate Mrs. Godfrey and I hate red. Mrs. Godfrey made me draw a picture of an apple once. I drew a green apple and she said it was wrong because no one eats green apples, you only use them for baking into apple pie. I threw my marker at her head, which meant I had to visit Mr. Lee in the Office.
Today is March 14, 2006. Today is my favorite day of the year because it is Pi day. Pi is the ratio of the circumference of any circle to its radius. The symbol for pi is π. Pi is approximately equal to 3.1415926. I have memorized pi to 230 digits. Whenever I feel scared I tell myself the numbers.
This morning I rode the bus to school. It took 37 minutes. We passed 9 blue cars and went through 17 stoplights. We always go through seventeen stoplights because we always go to school the same way. I got off the yellow bus (Number 34) and walked up the steps into the building. My class is on the second floor in room 201. I walk 23 steps up and 10 steps to the doorway. I can’t go straight to the door the way my friend Jeremy does, though, because my feet would touch the green tiles.
At 10:37 AM, the fire alarm rang. Mrs. Godfrey told everyone to queue up by the door and walk outside. I did not do what Mrs. Godfrey said to do, which is bad. My mother will be angry with me for disobeying the teacher. Instead of getting into the line, i ran out the door and into the hall. I hopped down the hall (careful not to step on any green tiles) and ran down the steps. I opened the door that said "EMERGENCY EXIT" on it and another alarm rang. Putting my ears over my head, i ran across the playground and into the street. I was very scared and i wanted to go home, but i didn't know which way to go, so i sat down on the black pavement and curled up. I started to recite pi, all the way to the 230th digit.
I started over at the begining, when i heard a loud noise. A car was coming over the hill, honking its horn at me. I tried to move but i was frozen and my legs wouldn't work. the man in the car yelled alot of bad words and slowed his car down. When the car stopped, i looked up and saw that the man was getting out of the car and coming towards me. He was big and wore a yellow shirt and blue pants. the shirt had 14 buttons and his pants were ripped at the knees. He kneeled down on the road and asked me what my name was. I told him "My name is Ben" He said what are you doing in the road. I said im scared and i want to go home. he said where do you live and i said 1594 Washington Street. He said he was on his lunch break, and he could take me home after he had lunch. I said ok and got in his truck. The truck was green and had the license plate, J6G-HYCT8. I rode in the front seat because his truck didn't have a back seat like my mom's car.
The man drove to a restaurant called Wendy's and parked in the 3rd space from the entrance. He got out of the truck and helped me get out of the seat because it was really high up. We went inside the restraunt and ordered food. The man bought me a vanilla milkshake. I thought it was nice of him. I drank the milkshake--which was very cold and thick--and he ate a hamburger. The End.
Sunday, March 16, 2008
WA 7 Rough
Ben's Story
My name is Ben Christopher Thompson. Ben is not short for Benjamin and no one calls me Benji. I read a book about a dog named Benji once. He had seven brown spots on his back. I go to Henson Elementary School. My teacher is Mrs. Godfrey. She wears red lipstick everyday. I hate Mrs. Godfrey and I hate red. Mrs. Godfrey made me draw a picture of an apple once. I drew a green apple and she said it was wrong because no one eats green apples, you only use them for baking into apple pie. I threw my marker at her head, which meant I had to visit Mr. Lee in the Office.
Today is March 14, 2006. Today is my favorite day of the year because it is Pi day. Pi is the ratio of the circumference of any circle to its radius. The symbol for pi is π. Pi is approximately equal to 3.1415926. I have memorized pi to 230 digits. Whenever I feel scared I tell myself the numbers.
This morning I rode the bus to school. It took 37 minutes. We passed 9 blue cars and went through 17 stoplights. We always go through seventeen stoplights because we always go to school the same way. I got off the yellow bus (Number 34) and walked up the steps into the building. My class is on the second floor in room 201. I walk 23 steps up and 10 steps to the doorway. I can’t go straight to the door the way my friend Jeremy does, though, because my feet would touch the green tiles.
My name is Ben Christopher Thompson. Ben is not short for Benjamin and no one calls me Benji. I read a book about a dog named Benji once. He had seven brown spots on his back. I go to Henson Elementary School. My teacher is Mrs. Godfrey. She wears red lipstick everyday. I hate Mrs. Godfrey and I hate red. Mrs. Godfrey made me draw a picture of an apple once. I drew a green apple and she said it was wrong because no one eats green apples, you only use them for baking into apple pie. I threw my marker at her head, which meant I had to visit Mr. Lee in the Office.
Today is March 14, 2006. Today is my favorite day of the year because it is Pi day. Pi is the ratio of the circumference of any circle to its radius. The symbol for pi is π. Pi is approximately equal to 3.1415926. I have memorized pi to 230 digits. Whenever I feel scared I tell myself the numbers.
This morning I rode the bus to school. It took 37 minutes. We passed 9 blue cars and went through 17 stoplights. We always go through seventeen stoplights because we always go to school the same way. I got off the yellow bus (Number 34) and walked up the steps into the building. My class is on the second floor in room 201. I walk 23 steps up and 10 steps to the doorway. I can’t go straight to the door the way my friend Jeremy does, though, because my feet would touch the green tiles.
Sunday, March 2, 2008
WA 6 Final
On a Cold Winter Night
Rebecca was a mature 12 years old and was accustomed to city life. She had lived in Chicago, Illinois her whole life. Rebecca, her brother David, and her parents lived in a spacious apartment in the center of the city. Every morning, Rebecca boarded the El with her older brother and rode to their stop at 14th and Stenson Boulevard. In the evening they rode the same train back home, where their mother had a hot, comforting meal waiting for them.
One bone chilling February evening, Rebecca’s mom asked if Rebecca could take a thermos of hot shop and a basket of freshly backed blue berry muffins to Beth’s sister stellar, who was in bed with the flu. Beth would have gone herself but she was up to her ears with housework, and Rebecca was at home with nothing to do. But watch the snow turn the dirty city into a winter wonderland. Rebecca was excited to trek through the city on her own. She donned her favorite coat—the puffy red one- and a pair of L.L. Bean snow boots and set off. Rebecca had been instructed to follow the directions her mother wrote out for her and not to dally at any stores she passed along the way.
The wind was fierce, and Rebecca’s pale cheeks turned strawberry red with every step she took. She found the train stop and hurried up the steps. In her haste, Rebecca slipped on a patch of ice and fell flat on her face. The other commuters at the stop hurried to her side to help her up. She tried her best to be brave, and not cry in front of so many strangers, but her brown eyes welled up with tears.
Rebecca sat on a nearby bench with a kind woman who made sure Rebecca wasn’t hurt. After a few minutes, Rebecca’s train, the t-815 came into view. As the train approached, Rebecca could see the lights shining through the windows of the cars. The image of the train in the wintry night reminded her of her favorite book, The Polar Express, the story of another child on an adventure of a lifetime.
The train jerked to a noisy halt and the metal doors sled open. Rebecca felt the car exhale warm, stale air onto her face. She stepped eagerly into the warmth and sat on a hard molded plastic seat. Rebecca noticed the absence of other passengers, which she thought was odd. Turning back toward the door where she entered, she saw a short scruffy man board the train. The doors closed with a resounding click.
The man sat down behind Rebecca. He hummed an eerie tune to himself. The song sounded familiar, but strange, as if in a different key. Rebecca clung tightly to her basket of food and prayed the train would soon come to a stop. They sat like this for a few minutes and suddenly the man fell silent. Rebecca felt him grab her shoulder and she jumped from her seat. The man also stood and asked in a deep, gruff voice, “What’s in the basket, little girl?”
Rebecca gasped and backed away as far as she could from the frightening man and stood pressed to the small door at the back of the car. She spun around and in her fear wrenched open the heavy steel door labeled in large red letters, “EMERGENCY EXIT ONLY.” Later that night, Rebecca would remember the smaller words on a plaque below that read “Opening this door will trigger the moving train to stop abruptly.” And abruptly stop it did. As the door swung open, the train screeched to a halt. Rebecca, frozen in fear and cold watched the ground below her come into sharp focus. The rails on which the train wheels grinded on caused angry red sparks to jump in every direction dying quickly in the wet cold night. Rebecca stood in between the cars over he streets of Chicago, her mind racing as the train she rode moments before. The man in the train had followed her to the door.
“Where are you going?” he called out, a sickly yellow smile on his face.
She tried to step away from him across to the connecting car. Her weak legs gave way, though, and she fell through the whirling show the street below.
Luckily for Rebecca, she landed on a mound of freshly shoveled snow. Dazed, but unharmed, she got up—basket still in her cold white hands—and ran toward a nearby group on onlookers standing on the street corner. Looking back, up at the train, she could see the shadowy silhouette of the man, still watching from the train.
***
Rebecca arrived safely at her aunt’s apartment. The soup was now cold and the muffins wet with melted snow, but of course it didn’t matter. She was safe and warm in her aunt’s loving arms.
Aunt Stella was relieved to see her niece and welcomed Rebecca into her cozy yellow kitchen. They shared a pot of hot tea and a bowl of golden popcorn at the kitchen table as Rebecca told her aunt the story of her first journey alone through the city
Falling asleep that night, Rebecca felt very lucky to have survived her trying day. The media tracked her down the next morning and retold her story to the rest of the city. It turns out, that scary man on the El was Harry Wolfe, wanted by the FBI for the murder of several children across the state.
That Sunday, the headline in the Chicago Tribune read, “Little Red Riding Hood Escapes from Wolf.”
The End
Rebecca was a mature 12 years old and was accustomed to city life. She had lived in Chicago, Illinois her whole life. Rebecca, her brother David, and her parents lived in a spacious apartment in the center of the city. Every morning, Rebecca boarded the El with her older brother and rode to their stop at 14th and Stenson Boulevard. In the evening they rode the same train back home, where their mother had a hot, comforting meal waiting for them.
One bone chilling February evening, Rebecca’s mom asked if Rebecca could take a thermos of hot shop and a basket of freshly backed blue berry muffins to Beth’s sister stellar, who was in bed with the flu. Beth would have gone herself but she was up to her ears with housework, and Rebecca was at home with nothing to do. But watch the snow turn the dirty city into a winter wonderland. Rebecca was excited to trek through the city on her own. She donned her favorite coat—the puffy red one- and a pair of L.L. Bean snow boots and set off. Rebecca had been instructed to follow the directions her mother wrote out for her and not to dally at any stores she passed along the way.
The wind was fierce, and Rebecca’s pale cheeks turned strawberry red with every step she took. She found the train stop and hurried up the steps. In her haste, Rebecca slipped on a patch of ice and fell flat on her face. The other commuters at the stop hurried to her side to help her up. She tried her best to be brave, and not cry in front of so many strangers, but her brown eyes welled up with tears.
Rebecca sat on a nearby bench with a kind woman who made sure Rebecca wasn’t hurt. After a few minutes, Rebecca’s train, the t-815 came into view. As the train approached, Rebecca could see the lights shining through the windows of the cars. The image of the train in the wintry night reminded her of her favorite book, The Polar Express, the story of another child on an adventure of a lifetime.
The train jerked to a noisy halt and the metal doors sled open. Rebecca felt the car exhale warm, stale air onto her face. She stepped eagerly into the warmth and sat on a hard molded plastic seat. Rebecca noticed the absence of other passengers, which she thought was odd. Turning back toward the door where she entered, she saw a short scruffy man board the train. The doors closed with a resounding click.
The man sat down behind Rebecca. He hummed an eerie tune to himself. The song sounded familiar, but strange, as if in a different key. Rebecca clung tightly to her basket of food and prayed the train would soon come to a stop. They sat like this for a few minutes and suddenly the man fell silent. Rebecca felt him grab her shoulder and she jumped from her seat. The man also stood and asked in a deep, gruff voice, “What’s in the basket, little girl?”
Rebecca gasped and backed away as far as she could from the frightening man and stood pressed to the small door at the back of the car. She spun around and in her fear wrenched open the heavy steel door labeled in large red letters, “EMERGENCY EXIT ONLY.” Later that night, Rebecca would remember the smaller words on a plaque below that read “Opening this door will trigger the moving train to stop abruptly.” And abruptly stop it did. As the door swung open, the train screeched to a halt. Rebecca, frozen in fear and cold watched the ground below her come into sharp focus. The rails on which the train wheels grinded on caused angry red sparks to jump in every direction dying quickly in the wet cold night. Rebecca stood in between the cars over he streets of Chicago, her mind racing as the train she rode moments before. The man in the train had followed her to the door.
“Where are you going?” he called out, a sickly yellow smile on his face.
She tried to step away from him across to the connecting car. Her weak legs gave way, though, and she fell through the whirling show the street below.
Luckily for Rebecca, she landed on a mound of freshly shoveled snow. Dazed, but unharmed, she got up—basket still in her cold white hands—and ran toward a nearby group on onlookers standing on the street corner. Looking back, up at the train, she could see the shadowy silhouette of the man, still watching from the train.
***
Rebecca arrived safely at her aunt’s apartment. The soup was now cold and the muffins wet with melted snow, but of course it didn’t matter. She was safe and warm in her aunt’s loving arms.
Aunt Stella was relieved to see her niece and welcomed Rebecca into her cozy yellow kitchen. They shared a pot of hot tea and a bowl of golden popcorn at the kitchen table as Rebecca told her aunt the story of her first journey alone through the city
Falling asleep that night, Rebecca felt very lucky to have survived her trying day. The media tracked her down the next morning and retold her story to the rest of the city. It turns out, that scary man on the El was Harry Wolfe, wanted by the FBI for the murder of several children across the state.
That Sunday, the headline in the Chicago Tribune read, “Little Red Riding Hood Escapes from Wolf.”
The End
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